Bobbie's Life

Saturday, June 6, 2009

Read about The Stephens Family's experience with mustangs in the Sierra backcountry!

Robby worked really hard on this. I returned it to him many times, and I am sooo impressed with his continued effort and with the tremendous family story that he shares here.

Sunday, May 10, 2009

Randomness Story by the first Minarets class of 2012

Remember this? It was a fun way to learn how to utilize Google Docs. What do you think of our group story? It's...special.

Randomness Story by the first Minarets class of 2012

The Color Purple Wiki, Frankenstein Essay and Independent Reading Characterization essay by Rachel Oatman

Rachel did a great job on her first book report wiki. I'm sure many other good ones will appear here on the blog when we turn them in on Friday!

Rachel puts a lot of effort into every line of her writing.She truly likes to write, and you can tell! Read her Frankenstein essay for a good example of how you will organize your writing on your Independent Reading Book Essay Test next week.

This is Rachel's latest essay. This is a book many of you may want to read. She wrote about Ransom my Heart by Meg Cabot. Jodi, Rachel and I had fun going down to Border's in Riverpark to pick this book out to read together. It is written by the author who made The Princess Diaries. Read Rachel's review.

Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Read this scary story by River Harmony

Click here to read Alice in Persistence. Get ready to be frightened.

Hamlet Essay by Chris

I was really impressed Chris's Hamlet Essay. He organized his thoughts very well and he had some very interesting ideas about the play's themes.

Click here to read Chris's Essay

Two Awsome Poems by Reno McClellan

WAR

blood i see
wet water like
it goes everywhere if you don't stop it

stop it nope
it is keep on coming out
pleazz stop

nope more of it is coming out
sorry
no stop the bleeding
too late
don't say that
it is too late
i feel dizzy
where am i
flashbacks of my life

when i was little or now
blood everywhere
old memories i see
blood everywhere

tell her i love her
no you are going to live

i see family going past me
blood on my arms
slowly i see people
time going past slowly
don't go
i..i....i

love her
_______________________________________________________________________________________

HARD

See people going past me
watching them with parents
It makes me think
will I ever see my parents back together

every day and night
seeing happy families
walking pass me
their happy seeing each other
hugging and kissing

Thinking seeing if they will

days, months, even years pass
I see parents all loving each other
it makes me think why?
why does it happen to me

Thinking seeing if they will

ring ring ring
I pick up
it's my mom
She wants to see me
she has a present

That makes me think
what is it
looking around for clothes

Thinking seeing if they will

going down where she lives
having a warm feeling in me
looking around in the world

seeing a house by itself
knowing that is her house, for now
she is walking out
I miss her a lot
she misses me too

Thinking seeing if they will

Thinking which guy she has now
Want to go home now
no way to get home

Thinking seeing if they will

Looking at the road, cars pass by
seeing parents together happy
Makes me sad looking at them

going inside where it is all smoke
I can't really see at all
sitting on the couch
being bored like always

Hear the door open
getting ready to see a guy that I don't know
wishing it was my dad
he starts to talk
wait, I know that voice

thinking seeing if they will

Hug. It feels warm

Chapter Three of Cheryl's "Among the Enemy"

Cheryl is on a roll and I know many of you are following her mystery.
Read Chapter Three here!
Way to go Cheryl! Keep it coming!

WOW!

Cloud
A cloud slowly rolls across the sky on the wind's mighty back
And forms into shapes and pictures fascinating to the mind's eye
By the imagination of a child
It floats freely in the air
And flies away just as quickly as it came, leaving behind a small puddle in the city below.

by Sarah Bradshaw

Click on this Google Doc link to see ALL of your classmates' HAIKU

http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dg25h9xj_3d96278hm

poem by Cody MacDougald

Dusk
After noon before night
it is time for dusk to rise
it covers the the forest ground like jam on toast
the time the moister rises from the ground and into the heavens
through peeks to peaks
by morning it is gone.

WOOOOOSH

Wind
Running through the trees
As though it's being chased
Running as though it has a chance
In the trees, getting caught
Then it disappears as if it were never there

by Sabrina Trimble

Rock on Jamin and Harley!

I am a guitar
fiery as hell
I shred
I scream
I can create
I can destroy
I am a guitar

By Jamin Baker


I am a string on the guitar.
chrome as a exhaust on a motorcycle.
I sweep.
I shred.
I can make beautiful sounds.
I can make the guitar the most valuable thing in your life.
I am a string on the guitar.

By Harley McGovran

May I present: the poet Lani Lee!

Quixotic
is a Purple Dragon
Flying around in your mind,
Living in everyones imagination,
Making you realize that the land of imagination can be better then reality.


I am a Equation
clear as a piece of glass
I confuse
I clarify
I can make your life easier
I can make your life harder
I am a Equation

Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Mrs Scott's English Class: Part II of Cheryl Brost's "Among the Enemy"

Among the Enemy

By Cheryl Brost

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click here to read CHAPTER TWO

Sarah B can write intense poetry!

Desire
is a slick fox,
slowly, slyly and cunningly moving toward the thing it wants most,
deep in the dark, gloomy forest,
driven by lust it will live alone among the forest floor

Part II of Cheryl Brost's "Among the Enemy"

Among the Enemy
By Cheryl Brost

Click on the link below to find out what happens to Cheryl Brost's characters in chapter II of "Among the Enemy".

Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Cheryl's Podcast Fiction - Part One

Sit back and enjoy listening to part I of Cheryl Brost's captivating story, "Among The Enemy". Her description is intricate and a passion for writing is evident in her work. I know she will go a long way!

Give It All by Amanda McKinney

I am very proud of this young lady. She created plot and suspense with ease; it just comes naturally to her. Her dialogue is so realistic! I can see this turning into a published mystery novel. Stay tunes for updates, as Amanda continues to write chapter after chapter whenever she gets a chance! Read the story yourself and weep!

Monday, October 6, 2008

Wordle - Beautiful Word Clouds

This a really cool word collage program that makes a graphic of how words are used in any pasted text. Jut paste a text into it, and it will make a collage of the words used most often. Then, embed the collage into your blog using html code! Choose any text you want; a song, an entire website, a story,or a poem.
Wordle - Beautiful Word Clouds

Thursday, September 25, 2008

"Hurt"

Rachel Oatman
September 23, 2008
English 9

                         "I will let you down I will make you hurt."

      “Hurt”, a song sung by Johnny Cash, a song originally sung by, "Nine Inch Nails," was his eulogy of his life. He made this music video in his last months. He knew that he was dying, and wanted to show his audience and listeners the mistakes that he had made. He wanted to show us what happens when people allow things to take over and destroy their lives. 

     He shows his life story through a series of pictures and videos depicting the duration of his life from birth to now, his final days. The video opens with a display of expensive, Roman antiques. You see Cash, now an old man, playing his guitar with a woebegone look on his weathered face. You see his museums, now closed, displaying how his life, and his influence was coming to a close. He perceives that his life life has been a waste and that no one will notice, care, or remember him when he is gone. 

     The symbolism in the video "Hurt" is very powerful. Johnny Cash uses Christ as a symbol of his own life's hurt, pain, and suffering. The video showed the intense affliction that Cash brought upon himself. Christ died so others could live he died by choice.  Cash was dying by choice too. The twisted morality of his younger years caught up with him in the end. He brought his own death upon himself by poisoning his body with drugs and alcohol. He shows this to his audience through the images he portrays in the midst of his interpretation of the song. The wine was another strong symbol. You see him pour out the wine onto a table filled with affluent objects, wasting the expensive wine. This symbolizes how Johnny poured out and wasted his whole life on his various addictions. His alcoholism was his major addiction or enslavement, which hurt everyone he knew, loved, and cared about.

     In order to understand Cash's flaws and failures, he reveals his full personality to the audience. This characterization can be seen throughout the entire music video, through the flashbacks of his life. He hurt many people by the mistakes that he made, but the person he hurt the most was the one person he loved and was closest to. His wife had stuck with him through everything his addictions, his being unfaithful, and his neglect of his children and his neglect of her as well. His viewers see her look at him, her face a picture of anguish and grief. Yet, her expression is also filled with undying love for this man, a man who ruined most of his life, and made her life extremely difficult. 

    Throughout the video, the audience can follow his life from the beginning to the end. This video shows how alcoholism can destroy a person's life and hurt the people around them. Johnny Cash uses his life as his own testimony for everyone else to learn from. He wanted to show people that the choices they make in their younger days, and even as they get older, really can make or break one's future. Perhaps he felt even if one person learned from his mistakes, his life's sufferings would have been worth it. 

Tuesday, September 23, 2008

Welcome Writers!

I am proud to have so many talented writers in my freshmen English class this year. As founders of a new high school they are motivated to share their work. Enjoy the fruit of their efforts.

Cheryl's Favorite Poem About her Sister